What do you think of this poem? C&C welcome?

Tori, from your opening line to your ending statement, it is so very clear the pain of loss you are battling with. It is said time is a healer, and in time that pain will p, but only you are the maker of that. Those cards and calls are out of love for you. though they may haunt you now, time will erase the sorrow and you will be able to look at the memories with sheer love. that same sheer love which pains you now for your loss. I send you only prayers to bless your heart, to help you heal. Dana